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The graph shows the number of visitors to four international museums between 1980 and 2015.

The line graph illustrates the number of visitors to four international museums between 1980 and 2015. It can be see that there was an upward trend in Louvre and Vatican museum, and the rest of the museums considerably dropped during the given period. Vatican museum had the highest rise among other international museums, from 4. 8 millions visitors in 1980 to 9. 3 million at the end of period. Louvre achieved the same result, 9. 5 million in 2015. But number of people who visited Louvre slightly increased from 7. 9 at the beginning of the period to 9. 5 millions. The London Science museum and Shenzhen museum significantly dropped, they had 4 million in the beginning of period. At least, Shenzhen museum fluctuated, but kept at the same level at the end, 4 million of visitors in 2015. As regards London Science museum, it had 4 million, but fell to 2 million in 2015.
The line graph illustrates the number of visitors to four international
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between 1980 and 2015. It can be
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that there was an upward trend in Louvre and Vatican
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, and the rest of the
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. Vatican
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had the highest rise among other international
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, from 4. 8
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visitors in 1980 to 9. 3
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at the
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. Louvre achieved the same result, 9. 5
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who visited Louvre
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. The London Science
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and Shenzhen
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significantly
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in the beginning of
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. At least, Shenzhen
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fluctuated,
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, 4
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of visitors in 2015. As regards London Science
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, it had 4
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IELTS academic The graph shows the number of visitors to four international museums between 1980 and 2015.

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