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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The maps below show a bookstore in 2000 and now. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Writing Task 1

The maps illustrate, a bookstore in 2000 and now. It gives a clear idea about the location of various things like fiction, art, hobbies, cookery, non-fiction and many more. In bookstore map 2000, from entranceentering further in front of it there is a block for travel books to its left a little smaller portion is of new books followed by the service desk. To the right of service desk there is a shelf for non-fictions and on its face three small shelfs are for art, hobbies and cookery. On the left side of the bookstore are fiction books formed in L-shape. Today the bookstore map is different, strating from entrance to the left shelfs are for art, hobbies, cookery, fiction and next to it is non-fiction. In the center of the bookstore three tables are laid for the dining purpose of the cafe. The travel, new books shelfs and service desk position remains the same as before. Hence, it is seen that earlier there was no cafe. On the other hand, today there is cafe with three dining tables in the boookstore. In 2000, there were to blocks for fiction. Whereas, there is only one block for fiction now.
The maps illustrate, a bookstore in 2000 and
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now
. It gives a
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clear
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idea
about the location of various things like
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fiction
, art, hobbies, cookery, non-fiction and
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many
more.

In bookstore map 2000, from
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entranceentering
further
in front of it there is a block for travel
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books
to its
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left
a
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little
smaller portion is of new
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books
followed by the service desk. To the right of service desk there is a
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shelf
for non-fictions and on its face three
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small
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shelfs
are for art, hobbies and cookery. On the
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left
side of the bookstore are
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fiction
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books
formed in L-shape.

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Today
the bookstore map is
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different
,
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strating
from entrance to the
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left
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shelfs
are for art, hobbies, cookery,
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fiction
and
next
to it is non-fiction. In the center of the bookstore three tables
are laid
for the dining purpose of the
‘cafe’ is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using “café”
cafe
. The travel, new
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books
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shelfs
and service desk position remains the same as
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before
.

Hence
, it is
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seen
that earlier there was no
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cafe
.
On the other hand
,
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today
there is
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cafe
with three dining tables in the
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boookstore
. In 2000, there were to blocks for
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fiction
. Whereas, there is
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only
one block for
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fiction
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now
.
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IELTS academic The maps below show a bookstore in 2000 and now.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
199 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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