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The line graph illustrates the amount of three kinds of spreads (margarine low fat and reduce spread and butter) which were consumed over 26 years from 1981 to 2007.

The line graph illustrates the amount of three kinds of spreads (margarine low fat and reduce spread and butter) which were consumed over 26 years from 1981 to 2007. Units are measured in grams. Overall, the consumption of margarine and butter decreased over the period given, while for low fat and reduce and reduce spreads, it rose. At the start of the period, butter was the most popular spread, which was replaced by margarine from 1991 to 20021, and following that low fat and reduce spreads became the most widely used spread in the final years. With regards to the amount of butter used, it began at around 140 grams and then peaked at 160 grams in 1986 before falling dramatically to about 50 grams in the last year. Likewise, approximately 90 grams of margarine was eaten in the first year after which the figure fluctuated slightly and dropped to a low of 40 grams in 2007. On the other hand, the consumption of low fats and reduce spreads only started in 1996 at about 10 grams. This figure, which reached a high of just over 80 grams 5 years later, fell slightly in the final years to approximately 70 grams in 2007.
The line graph illustrates the amount of three kinds of
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spreads
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(margarine
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low
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fat
and
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reduce
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spread
and
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butter)
which
were consumed
over 26 years from 1981 to 2007. Units
are measured
in grams.

Overall
, the consumption of
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margarine
and
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butter
decreased over the period
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given
, while for
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low
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fat
and
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reduce
and
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reduce
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spreads
, it rose. At the
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start
of the period,
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butter
was the most popular
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spread
, which
was replaced
by
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margarine
from 1991 to 20021, and following that
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low
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fat
and
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reduce
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spreads
became the most
widely
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used
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spread
in the final years.

Use “in regard to”, “with regard to”, or more simply “regarding”.
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the amount of
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butter
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used
, it began at around 140
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grams
and then peaked at 160
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grams
in 1986
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before
falling
dramatically
to about 50
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grams
in the last
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year
.
Likewise
, approximately 90
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grams
of
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margarine
was eaten
in the
first
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year
after which the figure fluctuated
slightly
and dropped to a
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low
of 40
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grams
in 2007.

On the other hand
, the consumption of
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low
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fats
and
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reduce
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spreads
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only
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started
in 1996 at about 10
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grams
. This figure, which reached a high of
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just
over 80
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grams
5 years later, fell
slightly
in the final years to approximately 70
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grams
in 2007.
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IELTS academic The line graph illustrates the amount of three kinds of spreads (margarine low fat and reduce spread and butter) which were consumed over 26 years from 1981 to 2007.

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