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The chart below shows information about Heart Attacks by Age and Gender in USA. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. The frequency of heart attacks in the US.

The bar chart illustrates information about the number of heart attacks in different age group (29to65+) men and women in the united state of AmericaOverall, the large number of heart attacks can be seen in every age group of male as compared to female. It can be clearly seen from the bar chart, 440000 heart attacks were noticed among men of age group 65+ followed by 424000 heart attacks were faced by men of 45-64 age group only 123000 cardiac arrest were faced by men of 29-44 age group. Moving further, the maximum number of 374000 heart attacks were recorded among female of 65+ age group. 136000 heart attacks can be seen in women of 45-64 age group. Just 3000 cardiac arrest problem faced from 29-44 age group
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from the bar chart, 440000
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IELTS academic The chart below shows information about Heart Attacks by Age and Gender in USA.

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