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The given bar graph articulates popularity of three distict modes of transport amongst the different countries. Overall, most prefreable mode is car in every country with the exception of germany. It is prospicuously ovserved that in thr case of Great Britain 60% people used cars for transportation. Similarly, The USA had quite equal sums documented for this mode. Whilst, Motorcycle was most popular in USA as compared to all rendered countries in this report, that was 30%. Albeit, in Great Britain only 10% motorcycles was driven by adults. By scrutiniging the rest of information, Germany dominated all countries in the term of Bicycles, approximately 45% adults traveled by this mode. . In contrast, this is least preferable mode in USA and france that is 10% and 15% respectively. Meanwhile, three fold youngester of Great Britain supported to Bicycle. Interestingly, most demanding mode that is car, has been recorded with maximum counts(70%) in france and minimum(40%) in Germany, where was 30 percent difference in between of them.

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 bar graph articulates popularity of three Possible spelling mistake found.districtdistinct
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