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The maps below show a bookstore in 2000 and now. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps illustrate the difference of a bookstore layout in 2000 and the present time. Overall, the arrangement and locations of different book genres are changed, three items remained the same while an additional service is also provided. In 2000, the bookstore was located inside a rectangular area where its entrance and everything was placed. Books about travel, new books and service desk were on the left side of the bookstore and can be seen after passing through the entrance. They remained the same until now. Looking at the changes made, there is now a cafe in the southern part of the store, and three tables and chairs are also added. The fiction section on the upper right side was replaced by non-fiction books. Also, the fiction section before, which covered almost the entire section of the store, was divided by other genres like art, which has the biggest portion, then, hobbies, cookery and fiction. And lastly, there isno more rectangular area covering the entire bookstore now, as compared in 2000.
The maps illustrate the difference of a bookstore layout in 2000 and the present time.
Overall
, the arrangement and locations of
different
book
genres are
changed
, three items remained the same while an additional service is
also
provided.

In 2000, the bookstore
was located
inside a rectangular area where its entrance and everything
was placed
.
Books
about travel, new
books
and service desk were on the
left
side of the bookstore and can be
seen
after passing through the entrance. They remained the same until
now
.

Looking at the
changes
made, there is
now
a
cafe
in the southern part of the store, and three tables and chairs are
also
added
. The fiction section on the upper right side
was replaced
by non-fiction
books
.
Also
, the fiction section
before
, which covered almost the entire section of the store,
was divided
by other genres like art, which has the biggest portion, then, hobbies, cookery and fiction. And
lastly
, there
isno
more rectangular area covering the entire bookstore
now
, as compared in 2000.
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IELTS academic The maps below show a bookstore in 2000 and now.

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  American English
3 paragraphs
171 words
6.0
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