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The charts below show the males and females arrested over 5 years and the reasons for the most recent arrests.

The pie charts show an overall comparison between percentages of people who are arrested broken down by gender starting on 1990 to 1994, whereas the bar chart further breaks down the information by their incentives. Overall, it can be clearly seen that the ratio of men who are arrested during the period far exceeded women in the same time frame, especially due to drink driving, not respecting orders, stealing, and other reasons. However, in terms of using alcohol in public and assulting, females are more likely caught because to those reasons. Furthermore, more women choose to not publically share their intent.
The pie charts
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show
an
overall
comparison between percentages of
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people
who
are arrested
broken down by gender starting on 1990 to 1994,

whereas the bar chart
further
breaks down the information by their incentives.

Overall
, it can be
clearly
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seen
that the ratio of
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men
who
are arrested
during the period far exceeded women in the same time frame,
especially
due to
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drink driving
, not respecting orders, stealing, and other reasons.

However
, in terms of using alcohol in public and
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assulting
, females are more likely caught
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because
to those reasons.
Furthermore
, more women choose to not
publically
share their intent.
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IELTS academic The charts below show the males and females arrested over 5 years and the reasons for the most recent arrests.

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