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The diagram below shows how ethanol fuel is produced from corn.

The diagram below is demostrating us the way ethanol fuil is made from corn. Corn fuel is really popular nowadays, because its eco friendly product. It takes us 9 stages to produce the final product which can be presented to the costumers. The first steps in this process takes storing vegetables and miling them. After this is done we add water to our substance and then cook it for 4 hours. Next phase is fermenting our output, 48 hours is allotted for this process. By the end of 2 days we separate product into two produce: liquid and solid by-product. The steps after are done with our fluid. The pre-ending phase is purifying Ethanol into our liquid. It takes 5 hours to finish this stage. So after this done we can enter into our last stage, which is storing final fuel and then transporting it to the shops, fuel station, etc.
The diagram below is
demostrating
us the way ethanol
fuil
is made
from corn. Corn fuel is
really
popular nowadays,
because
its
eco friendly
product. It takes us 9 stages to produce the final product which can
be presented
to the costumers. The
first
steps in this process takes storing vegetables and
miling
them. After this
is done
we
add
water to our substance and then cook it for 4 hours.
Next
phase is fermenting our output, 48 hours
is allotted
for this process. By the
end
of 2 days we separate product into two produce: liquid and solid by-product. The steps after
are done
with our fluid. The pre-ending phase is purifying Ethanol into our liquid. It takes 5 hours to finish this stage.
So
after this done we can enter into our last stage, which is storing final fuel and then transporting it to the shops, fuel station, etc.
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IELTS academic The diagram below shows how ethanol fuel is produced from corn.

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