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The maps below compare the development of seaside resort of Brinslow from 1990 to 2005.

The maps below compare the development of seaside resort of Brinslow from 1990 to 2005. ApQ1X
The maps below compare the development of seaside resort of Templeton from 1990 to 2005. To begin with, In 1990, there were railway station in the east are of the resort and near this place was situated a woodland beside the sea. After the woodland, school and hospital could be found at the right side of the river, at central of the resort. In the western area, the hotel was built near the lake. Moreover, In 2005, the airport was built behind the school and houses were added behind hospital. The harbor was constructed at the south of the railway station. Furthermore, the railway was extended from the east to the west. In addition, the woodland at the east area of the resort was altered by factory and supermarket was built in the left hand of the bridge. Houses were changed into two skyscrapers, while the hotel near the lake went up became two skyscrapers. Finally, between supermarket and lake, houses were built, letting only one tree compare to 1990. Overall, there had been several construction in the northern area of the resort and replacement from woodland and houses in 1990 to facilities and skyscrapers as well as harbor in 2005.
The maps below compare the development of seaside
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of Templeton from 1990 to 2005. To
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resort
and near this place
was situated
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woodland
beside the sea. After the
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, school and hospital could
be found
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at the right side
of the river, at central of the
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resort
. In the western area, the hotel
was built
near the lake.
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, In 2005, the airport
was built
behind the school and
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houses
were
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added
behind hospital. The harbor
was constructed
at the south of the railway station.
Furthermore
, the railway
was extended
from the east to the west.
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, the
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woodland
at the east area of the
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resort
was altered
by factory and supermarket
was built
in the
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left
hand of the bridge.
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Houses
were
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changed
into two skyscrapers, while the hotel near the lake went up became two skyscrapers.
Finally
, between supermarket and lake,
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houses
were built
, letting
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only
one tree compare to 1990.
Overall
, there had been
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several construction
in the northern area of the
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resort
and replacement from
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woodland
and
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houses
in 1990 to facilities and skyscrapers
as well
as harbor in 2005.
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