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The three pie graphs depict the manufacture,intake of coffee and where the lucre goes around the globe. It is measured in percentage.

The three pie graphs depict the manufacture, intake of coffee and where the lucre goes around the globe. It is measured in percentage. MoLY9
The three pie graphs depict the manufacture, intake of coffee and where the lucre goes around the globe. It is measured in percentage. Overall, as shown by the chart, Europe has the highest proportion of java ingested with America in the second position. Also, the production level of umber surged in South Africa and delivery net income was more than half compared to retailers, exporters and producers. To begin, a look across the first graph revealed that two-fifth of European consumed coffee with only 39% in America, while the lowest percentage is seen in the rest of the world and Japan at 12% and 8% respectively. In addition, the second chart shows that more than two-fifth of java were produced in South- Africa, in Indonesia, a little bit above one-fifth was manufactured, while coffee production in Japan and Vietnam stood at 18% and 16% respectively. Furthermore, the third pie graph gives information about profit dispersion with delivery accounted for more than half of the entire world, retailers occupied more than one-fifth and one-tenth is for the exporters, while manufacturer took up 15% of the lucre around the globe.
The three pie graphs depict the manufacture, intake of coffee and where the lucre goes around the globe. It
is measured
in percentage.

Overall
, as shown by the chart, Europe has the highest proportion of java ingested with America in the second position.
Also
, the production level of umber surged in South Africa and delivery net income was more than half compared to retailers, exporters and producers.

To
begin
, a look across the
first
graph revealed that two-fifth of European consumed coffee with
only
39% in America, while the lowest percentage is
seen
in the rest of the world and Japan at 12% and 8%
respectively
.
In addition
, the second chart
shows
that more than two-fifth of java
were produced
in South- Africa, in Indonesia, a
little bit
above one-fifth
was manufactured
, while coffee production in Japan and Vietnam stood at 18% and 16%
respectively
.

Furthermore
, the third pie graph gives information about profit dispersion with delivery accounted for more than half of the entire world, retailers occupied more than one-fifth and one-tenth is for the exporters, while manufacturer took up 15% of the lucre around the globe.
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IELTS academic The three pie graphs depict the manufacture, intake of coffee and where the lucre goes around the globe. It is measured in percentage.

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