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The maps the changes from 1995 to the present.

The maps the changes from 1995 to the present. xgb6N
The two maps illustrate how the layout of a village by the sea has changed from 1995 to the present day. Overall, it is clear that provision for accommodation and leisure facilities has increased, replacing land which was previously used for agriculture, forestry, and commercial fishing. One key change is the construction of apartment buildings on the west side of the waterfront at the site of the former fish market and port. In addition, several restaurants have been built across the road where previously there were shops. The housing development in the north-west area has also been extended. In 1995, there were 12 houses in total, rising to 16 in the present day. Another significant development is the creation of a golf course and tennis courts in the north-eastern area, which has replaced agricultural land and a forest park. A hotel and cafe' in the south-eastern remain the same. However, a car park has been added to the hotel.
The two maps illustrate how the layout of a village by the sea has
changed
from 1995 to the present day.
Overall
, it is
clear
that provision for accommodation and leisure facilities has increased, replacing land which was previously
used
for agriculture, forestry, and commercial fishing. One key
change
is the construction of apartment buildings on the west side of the waterfront at the site of the former fish market and port.
In addition
, several restaurants have
been built
across the road where previously there were shops. The housing development in the north-west area has
also
been extended
. In 1995, there were 12
houses
in total, rising to 16 in the present day. Another significant development is the creation of a golf course and tennis courts in the north-eastern area, which has replaced agricultural land and a forest park. A hotel and
cafe
' in the south-eastern remain the same.
However
, a car park has been
added
to the hotel.
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