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The maps below changes in the Spanish city of Castellon in recent times. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparations where relevant

The two maps illustrate how a Spanish city named Castellon has changed since 2000. Overall, it is noticeable that this city has been modernized and upgraded with a range of new transports, shopping and entertainment facilities. To begin with, the most obvious improvements to transport facilities are the building of a tram line that connected the city centre with the university. While there is a relocation of the station recently, the police station takes over its original site. It is also remarkable that bike-rental scheme is introduced to the centre and a new airport in the eastern area is under construction. However, other facilities have also increased substantially over these years. The new hall of residence was constructed to the east side of the city while the trees are all cut down to make room for a new shopping centre. New shops are also built in the west of the city, while the old market is moving to the east and turned into a new covered market. Looking at the port area, it can be seen that it has been pedestrianized, and cinemas, bars and clubs are built there to offer entertainment.
The two maps illustrate how a Spanish city named
Castellon
has
changed
since 2000.

Overall
, it is noticeable that this city has
been modernized
and upgraded with a range of
new
transports, shopping and entertainment facilities.

To
begin
with, the most obvious improvements to transport facilities are the building of a tram line that connected the city
centre
with the university. While there is a relocation of the station recently, the police station takes over its original site. It is
also
remarkable that bike-rental scheme
is introduced
to the
centre
and a
new
airport in the eastern area is under construction.

However
, other facilities have
also
increased
substantially
over these years. The
new
hall of residence
was constructed
to the east side of the city while the trees are all
cut
down to
make
room for a
new
shopping
centre
.
New
shops are
also
built in the west of the city, while the
old
market is moving to the east and turned into a
new
covered market. Looking at the port area, it can be
seen
that it has
been pedestrianized
, and cinemas, bars and clubs
are built
there to offer entertainment.
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IELTS academic The maps below changes in the Spanish city of Castellon in recent times.

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