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The table shows the worldwide market share of the mobile phone market for manufactures in the years 2005 and 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. Worldwide Mobile phone Sales in 2005 & 2006 (% share of market) Company 2005 % Market share 2006 % Market share Nokia 32.5 35 Motorola 17.7 21.1 Samsung 12.7 11.8 Sony Ericsson 6.3 7.4 L.G 6.7 6.3 BenQ Mobile 4.9 2.4 Others 19.2 16.2 TOTAL 100.0 100.0

The diagram illustrates the worldwide market share of mobile phone manufacturers for two consecutive years. Overall it can be seen that Nokia company has the highest market share for both 200 and 2006. In 2005 and 2006, Nokia company predominated the market share of mobile phone manufacturers by having the most numbered of stocks. Mainly in 2005, Nokia has a total stock of 32. 5 percent. In addition, in the following year, it was increased to 35 percent leaving behind its competitors. On the other hand, Motorola ranked second having 17. 7 percent in the worldwide mobile phone sales in 2005. Moreover in 2006, its sales rose to 21. 1 percent. Whereas, Samsung company stood at 12. 7 percent in 2005 but declines slightly to 11. 8 percent in subsequent year. While, Sony Ericsson, shares grows from 6. 3 to 7. 4 percent. LG decreased minimally from 6. 7 to 6. 3. BenQ mobile has a significant drop in shares of more than halved from 2005 to 2006, from 4. 9 to 2. 9 percent.

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