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The following diagram shows how three different type of tea are made

The following diagram shows how three different type of tea are made PgM5J
The diagram shows information about the making of three different type of tea through fresh tea leaves. It is clearly seen that the process of three different tea start from fresh tree leaves and it all consists three steps. To begin with, making of green tea process start from steaming the drying leaves. Then rolled the steamed leaves. Followed by, the last step of green tea is trying the rolling leaves into oven. Moving further to Oolong tea, the first step is brushing the fresh tea leaves and oxidized the brushing leaves. After that put oxidation leaves into oven for drying. Inaddition making of black tea process begin with rolled the leaves and then full oxidised the leaves the last step is dryed the leaves into oven and making the black tea.
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through fresh
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leaves
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that the process of three
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from fresh tree
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and it all consists three steps.

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with, making of green
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process
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from steaming the drying
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. Then rolled the steamed
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. Followed by, the last step of green
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is trying the rolling
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into oven.

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Oolong
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and oxidized the brushing
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. After that put oxidation
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into oven for drying.
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making of black
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process
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with rolled the
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and then full
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oxidised
the
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the last step is
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into oven and making the black
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IELTS academic The following diagram shows how three different type of tea are made

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132 words
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