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The graph above gives information about the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002, which is classified into four different modes of transport.

The graph above gives information about the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002, which is classified into four different modes of transport. p5XM9

The data shows that from 1974 to 2002, road has the biggest quantity than another modes of transport, however the pipeline has the smallest quantity. Those four modes are fluctuative, but it didn’t increase or decrease significantly. In the year of 1974 the rail mode was on the second place of biggest goods transported quantity, but from 1978 to 2002 it gone to the third place, and replaced by the quantity of the water mode. The quantity of the road mode comes to the peak at 2002, by the quantity of over 90 million tonnes. The quantity of the pipeline mode never get the amount more than 30 million tonnes. All the transportation modes get increased during the period of 1996 to 2002.

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