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The graph above gives information about the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002, which is classified into four different modes of transport.

The graph above gives information about the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002, which is classified into four different modes of transport. p5XM9
The data shows that from 1974 to 2002, road has the biggest quantity than another modes of transport, however the pipeline has the smallest quantity. Those four modes are fluctuative, but it didn’t increase or decrease significantly. In the year of 1974 the rail mode was on the second place of biggest goods transported quantity, but from 1978 to 2002 it gone to the third place, and replaced by the quantity of the water mode. The quantity of the road mode comes to the peak at 2002, by the quantity of over 90 million tonnes. The quantity of the pipeline mode never get the amount more than 30 million tonnes. All the transportation modes get increased during the period of 1996 to 2002.
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that from 1974 to 2002, road has the biggest
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quantity
than another
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modes
of transport,
however
the pipeline has the smallest
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quantity
. Those four
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modes
are
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fluctuative
,
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it didn’t increase or decrease
significantly
. In the year of 1974 the rail
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was on the second place of
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biggest
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goods
transported
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quantity
,
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but
from

1978 to 2002 it gone to the third place, and replaced by the
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quantity
of the water
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mode
. The
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quantity
of the road
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mode
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comes
to the peak at 2002, by the
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of over 90 million tonnes. The
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of the pipeline
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never
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get
the amount more than 30 million tonnes. All the transportation
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modes
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increased during the period of 1996 to 2002.

IELTS academic The graph above gives information about the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002, which is classified into four different modes of transport.

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