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The maps above illustrated the changes made on an island for tourism development.

The maps above illustrated the changes made on an island for tourism development. p1kl2

The maps above illustrated the changes made on an island for tourism development. In general, the island spreads around 200 metres long and previously barely had any building in it. Over the development period, numerous tourism buildings were constructed on the central and west sides of the island. However, the east side of the island remained unchanged. Located in the south of the island, landing docks were made for the boats to accessing the island. Then, following the vehicle track to the north, a reception building was erected in the central area and to the right side of it, there are 9 villas established in a circular shape. Those villas were the closest human-made buildings to the untouched jungle on the east side of the island. A fascinating restaurant was built on the north side of the island where travellers can enjoy their food while facing the north sea and to the west side of that building, 6 more villas and bungalows were also built encircle some trees. Following the footpath to the west of the bungalows, there is a virgin beach where tourists can swim and do some water activities.

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 made on an You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpeninsulareefarchipelagoenclaveisletisle
island
 for tourism development.

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, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpeninsulareefarchipelagoenclaveisletisle
island
 spreads around 200 Possible spelling mistake. 'metres' is British English.meters
metres
 long and previously barely
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building
 in it. Over the development period, numerous tourism You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhuthouseconstructionarchitecturehome
buildings
were constructed
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sides
 of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpeninsulareefarchipelagoenclaveisletisle
island
. However
, the east side of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpeninsulareefarchipelagoenclaveisletisle
island
 remained unchanged.

Located in the south of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpeninsulareefarchipelagoenclaveisletisle
island
, landing docks were made
 for the boats to accessing the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpeninsulareefarchipelagoenclaveisletisle
island
. Then, following the vehicle This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
track
 to the north, a reception You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhuthouseconstructionarchitecturehome
building
was erected
 in the central area and to the right side of it, there are 9 villas established in a circular shape. Those villas were the closest human-made You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhuthouseconstructionarchitecturehome
buildings
 to the untouched jungle on the east side of the island.

A fascinating restaurant was built
 on the north side of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpeninsulareefarchipelagoenclaveisletisle
island
 where Possible spelling mistake found.travelers
travellers
 can enjoy their food while facing the If the term is a proper noun, use initial capitals.North Sea
north sea
 and to the west side of that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhuthouseconstructionarchitecturehome
building
, 6 more villas and bungalows were also
 built encircle This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 trees. Following the footpath to the west of the bungalows, there is a virgin beach where tourists can swim and do This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 water activities. 