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Although a huge part of the population suffers from malnutrition in Pakistan

Although a huge part of the population suffers from malnutrition in Pakistan 7LdD3
Food is considered one of the essential requirements for our survival. This essay will discuss why a huge part of the population in Pakistan is experiencing malnutrition although there is the presence of food wastage in public events and restaurants. Usually, at public events, the organizers and caterers prepare limited food choices when they do not have any knowledge about the preferences of the attendees which leads to food wastage. Some may like the food served, some may have allergies, and some may not like the food at all. Another reason, some restaurants do not store the leftovers for the day in fear that they may be sued by customers for food poisoning if they will serve it the next day. It is also common that restaurants’ staff are not allowed to give away the leftovers for the day for the same reason. While a lot of people are suffering from malnutrition in Pakistan, it saddens me that a lot of food goes to waste. With this, I suggest the restaurants create their policy to donate to food banks the remaining edible food they are to throw away every night. Public events with food catering should also limit their servings to guests to avoid food wastage. On decayed food, there are organizations in the community that help in composting them. Proper disposal helps minimize food wastes. We should also work or communicate with the community to keep us updated about their programs about food wastage. There are available technologies such as freezers to preserve and/or prolong the shelf life of some food. We can also be part of some community feeding program or we could launch or join community pantries in our communities. In this time of the pandemic, we should be thrift as much as we can because everything is scarce, we should value food. It is our responsibility as members of society to care for the hungry while we are privileged to have something to eat at our tables. The small portion of the blessings that we received is never small for people that are in great need.
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food
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wastage
in public
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events
and restaurants.

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, at public
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events
, the organizers and caterers prepare limited
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food
choices when they do not have any knowledge about the preferences of the attendees which leads to
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food
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wastage
.
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Some
may like the
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food
served,
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some
may have allergies, and
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some
may not like the
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food
at all. Another reason,
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some
restaurants do not store the leftovers for the day in fear that they may
be sued
by customers for
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food
poisoning if they will serve it the
next
day. It is
also
common that restaurants’ staff are not
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allowed
to give away the leftovers for the day for the same reason.

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a lot of
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people
are suffering from malnutrition in Pakistan, it saddens me that
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a lot of
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food
goes to waste. With this, I suggest the restaurants create their policy to donate to
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food
banks the remaining edible
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food
they are to throw away every night. Public
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events
with
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food
catering should
also
limit their servings to guests to avoid
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food
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wastage
. On decayed
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food
, there are organizations in the
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community
that
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help
in composting them. Proper disposal
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helps
minimize
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wastes. We should
also
work or communicate with the
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community
to
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keep
us updated about their programs about
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food
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wastage
. There are available technologies such as freezers to preserve and/or prolong the shelf life of
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some
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food
. We can
also
be part of
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community
feeding
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program or
we could launch or
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join
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pantries in our communities.

In this time of the pandemic, we should be thrift as much as we can
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because
everything is scarce, we should value
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food
. It is our responsibility as members of society to care for the hungry while we
are privileged
to have something to eat at our tables. The
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small
portion of the blessings that we received is never
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small
for
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people
that are in great need.
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IELTS academic Although a huge part of the population suffers from malnutrition in Pakistan

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