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the changes of the student common room in 5 years

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The two maps illustrate the alterations in the student common room in the period of five years. Overall, there are significant changes in the rearrangements of the tables and the appearance of some amenities. As we can see, in the past, there were four sets of 7-piece rounded table in the room, but now two of them have been removed and replaced by a 9-piece rectangle shaped table. Moreover, the fridge was put away to make way for a television surrounded by three additional armchairs. There is also the appearance of the bench for laptops which is placed between the table and the TV set. In terms of other shifts, the present room witnessed the appeanance of the a new drinks machine which is put in the corner of the room, next to the refrigerator. In addition, a new microware has been installed at the position of the bench while other furnitures remain unchanged.

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 amenities.

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table
 and the TV set.

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