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Position on students taking a time for experiences before university

Position on students taking a time for experiences before university Doyeo
Is it recommended taking a time before deciding your career? In my personal opion, yes. Now, even thou it is described to me as a time for getting some laboral or traveling experience only, I think there is so much more than that within that 'recess'. Even when this was not my case, I know there are people indecisive about what to do, pretty much, for the rest of their lives. When a person takes the time to get a job, no matter if it is casual or not, it provides a more accurate point of view towards the laboral world outside, which may help them get an idea of what to decide. I think it is remarkable that traveling is not useless since it takes out of your eyes that blindfold and expand your cosmo-vision. There are occupations that you would probably love but you just have not met yet; there may be things that you have to know before making such a relevant choice. I do not think or reinforce this time as something strictly necessary, nevertheless, I do believe each individual have to go through the process of selecting a University in a very personal way.
Is it recommended taking a
time
before
deciding your career? In my personal
opion
, yes.
Now
, even thou it is
described
to me as a
time
for getting
some
laboral
or traveling experience
only
, I
think
there is
so
much more than that within that 'recess'. Even when this was not my case, I know there are
people
indecisive about what to do, pretty much, for the rest of their
lives
. When a person takes the
time
to
get
a job, no matter if it is casual or not, it provides a more accurate point of view towards the
laboral
world outside, which may
help
them
get
an
idea
of what to decide. I
think
it is remarkable that traveling is not useless since it takes out of your eyes that blindfold and expand your
cosmo-vision
. There are occupations that you would
probably
love
but
you
just
have not met
yet
; there may be things that you
have to
know
before
making such a relevant choice. I do not
think
or reinforce this
time
as something
strictly
necessary,
nevertheless
, I do believe each individual
have to
go through the process of selecting a University in a
very
personal way.
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