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The map shows the layout of meadowside village and front on town in 1960 to 1985 and present

The map shows the layout of meadowside village and front on town in 1960 to 1985 and present DlBMj
The map chart demonstrate the information about the meadowside village and fronton town which have developed over three different time period 1960 to 1985 and present. From the overall analysis, it is noticeable that now there are some changes can be seen in village such as business park, station and hotel. As it is crystal clear from the chart that in 1926, there was a meadowside village situated between north and south side. Whereas, it was demolished into leisure complex in same direction in 1985. However, there is no change can be seen in housing estate and super store. Moving further, at the present time, there is new meadowside suburbs is situated in Northern side of the village. station and Hotel facilities are also new added in village. moreover, business parks is also new built in the south direction.
The map chart demonstrate the information about the
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meadowside
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village
and
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fronton
town which have developed over three
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time period 1960 to 1985 and present.

From the
overall
analysis, it is noticeable that
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now
there are
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some
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changes
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seen
in
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village
such as business park, station and hotel.

As it is crystal
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clear
from the chart that in 1926, there was a
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meadowside
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village
situated between north and south side.
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Whereas
, it
was demolished
into leisure complex in same direction in 1985.
However
, there is no
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change
can be
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seen
in housing estate and super store.

Moving
further
, at the present time, there is new
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meadowside
suburbs
is situated
in Northern side of the
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village
.
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station
and Hotel facilities are
also
new
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added
in
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village
.
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moreover
, business parks is
also
new built in the south direction.
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IELTS academic The map shows the layout of meadowside village and front on town in 1960 to 1985 and present

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139 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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