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The chart below display the percentage of the area and the current population of the seven continents of the earth.

The chart below display the percentage of the area and the current population of the seven continents of the earth. g57bO
The given pie charts depicts the proportion of the land and the present citizens of the seven part of the earth. To begin with, firstly, majority of individuals like to stay in Asia whereas only 30 % land have Asia but more than doubled people stay there. Followed by, Europe was the second largest part where only 7% land and around 12 % inhabitants live there. On the other hand, other sector of the world have almost doubled place than people live. 13% population have South America and 5. 50% Africa however, they have 20% and 12% of soil area. In case of Oceania and Antarctica minority people stay there, less than one percent. To conclude, it can be clearly witnessed that highest proportion of citizens stay in Asia than the percentage of land it has.
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IELTS academic The chart below display the percentage of the area and the current population of the seven continents of the earth.

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