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The diagram below shows how raw materials are used to make plastic products

The diagram below shows how raw materials are used to make plastic products WyWE5

The diagram depicts that there are a number of processes involved in the production of plastic items. Apparently, this is a complex process that requires a range of equipment and machinery and, at some stage, skilled workers. Firstly, the raw materials need to be delivered from the petroleum refinery to the plant. Once arrived, They are poured into a large drum and next passed to a special oven, which can heat the ingredients at a high pressure to form long molecules of plastic. The second being molding, in which the granules are fed into the hopper and melted before reshaping and becoming mold again. At this point, the product is fundamentally completed, while at the same time, it also leaving some unwanted stuff. Before being wrapped, the finished products have to be checked for any flaw by inspectors. If there are no problems, they will be packaged and stored in a warehouse.

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, this is a complex process that requires a range of equipment and machinery and, at This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 stage, skilled workers.

Firstly
, the raw materials need to be delivered
 from the petroleum refinery to the plant. Once arrived, They are poured
 into a large drum and next
 passed to a special oven, which can heat the ingredients at a high pressure to form long molecules of plastic.

The second being molding, in which the granules are fed
 into the hopper and melted This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 reshaping and becoming mold again. At this point, the product is fundamentally
 completed, while at the same time, it also
 leaving This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 unwanted stuff.

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Before
being wrapped
, the finished products This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitored
checked
 for any flaw by inspectors. If there are no problems, they will be packaged
 and stored in a warehouse. 