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The graph below gives information about internet users in three countries between 1999 and 2009. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. Make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information about internet users in three countries between 1999 and 2009. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. Make comparisons where relevant. g57YA
The line chart illustrates data about the percentages of people who use the internet over a period of 10 years from 1999 to 2009 in the USA, Canada, and Mexico. A glance at the graph provided reveals a clear trend towards using the internet more during the years and percentages in the three countries rose steadily during the period. In 1999, approximately 25 percent of people in the USA used the internet whereas the figure for the other two countries was lower at the same time. In the next three years, the percentage for all of the countries rose. Meanwhile, the figure for Canada improve exponentially, about forty percent, and put this country in first place among these countries. Simultaneously, the figure for the USA and Mexico climb only 10 and 20 percent, respectively. During the next seven years, all of the mentioned above countries continued their growth with the same trends. At the end of the period, in 2009, the proportion of internet users for Canadians and Americans was about a hundred percent and ninety percent, respectively, compared to only forty percent of Mexicans.
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the internet over a period of 10 years from 1999 to 2009 in the USA, Canada, and Mexico.

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trend towards using the internet more during the years and percentages in the three
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rose
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in the USA
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the internet whereas the figure for the other two
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was lower at the same time. In the
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three years, the percentage for
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all of the
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rose. Meanwhile, the figure for Canada
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, about forty
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in
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place among these
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10 and 20
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During the
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seven years,
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continued their growth with the same trends. At the
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of the period, in 2009, the proportion of internet users for Canadians and Americans was about a hundred
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and ninety
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,
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of Mexicans.
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IELTS academic The graph below gives information about internet users in three countries between 1999 and 2009. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. Make comparisons where relevant.

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