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The map shows the changes to a residence hall between 2010 and the present

The map shows the changes to a residence hall between 2010 and the present gxnmL

The given map illustrates the significant transformations of the student dormitory in 2010 and at the present time. Overall, it is obvious that a residence hall witnessed a remarkable development with the introduction of living areas and rooms by the end of the period. In 2010, the house contained two study bedrooms, the building contains two study bedrooms, that the first one in the left side has doubled currently, while the second one remained intact. Also, the old design included an entranceway opening into a large hall with a bathroom, which was opposite the living room. Moreover, there were a kitchen and another study bedroom on the right side directly across from the entrance. In the present, the living room is replaced by a large study bedroom in the top left corner. The bathroom has reduced in size and an ensuite bathroom is added next to the hall. In addition, the kitchen has extended to provide a social area on the right side, while the study/bedroom in the bottom right corner remains unmodified. Furthermore, the upper garden remains unchanged outside the house, while the lower one will be demolished and replaced for a parking area.

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given
 map illustrates the significant transformations of the student dormitory in 2010 and at the present time.

Overall
, it is obvious that a residence hall witnessed a remarkable development with the introduction of living areas and rooms by the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of the period.

In 2010, the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
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study
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bedrooms
, the building contains two You use this word too often, consider replacing it withapplicationreviewinquirydebateresearchcourse
study
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bedrooms
, that the first
 one in the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 side has doubled currently
, while the second one remained intact. Also
, the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 design included an Possible spelling mistake found.entrance way
entranceway
 opening into a large hall with a bathroom, which was opposite the living room. Moreover
, there were a kitchen and another You use this word too often, consider replacing it withapplicationreviewinquirydebateresearchcourse
study
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bedroom
 on the right side directly
 across from the entrance.

In the present, the living room is replaced
 by a large You use this word too often, consider replacing it withapplicationreviewinquirydebateresearchcourse
study
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bedroom
 in the top This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 corner. The bathroom has This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviated
reduced
 in size and an Possible spelling mistake found.en suite
ensuite
 bathroom is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
next
 to the hall. In addition
, the kitchen has extended to provide a social area on the right side, while the study/bedroom in the bottom right corner remains unmodified. Furthermore
, the upper garden remains unchanged outside the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
, while the lower one will be demolished
 and replaced for a parking area. 