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The map shows the changes in ground floor from 2001 to 2009.

The map shows the changes in ground floor from 2001 to 2009. 8d6Lm
The two map depicts the information about the changes occured in the ground floor between 2001 and 2009. In 2001, there was a fiction center at the north side of ground floor which had been replaced by children books center in 2009. In both the years, entrance libraries desk and stairs had similar location. on the centre of the ground floor there was 8 tables for sitting but after 8 years it was converted into four large sitting tables. Moving further, for more changes on the left side of the map in 2001 showed that two rooms that self help and history while, it was split into six classes such as history, fiction, self help, law, environment and kitchen. However, newspaper and periodicals section was replaced into films and dvds section in 2009 as well as established new computer room near this section in similar year. Overall, it is obvious that the ground floor has been rearranged significantly and more infrastructure have been built in given period.
The two map depicts the information about the
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changes
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occured
in the
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ground floor
between 2001 and 2009.

In 2001, there was a fiction center at the north side of
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ground floor


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which
had
been replaced
by children books center in 2009. In both the years, entrance libraries desk and stairs had similar location.
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on
the
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centre
of the
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ground floor
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there was 8 tables
for sitting
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but
after 8 years it
was converted
into four large sitting tables.

Moving
further
, for more
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changes
on the
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left
side of the map in 2001
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showed
that two rooms that self
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help
and history while, it
was split
into six classes such as history, fiction, self
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help
, law, environment and kitchen.
However
, newspaper and periodicals section
was replaced
into films and
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dvds
section in 2009
as well
as established new computer room near this section in similar year.

Overall
, it is obvious that the
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ground floor
has
been rearranged
significantly
and more infrastructure have
been built
in
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given
period.
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