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Line graph about children’ sport

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The couple of line graphs depict the average monthly British parents expenditure on children’s sporting activities and the statistic for children in Britain participating in three different sports from 2008 to 2014. It can be seen that the money parents spending had an evidently steady rise over the six-year period, starting in 2008. In terms of the sum of children taking part, football accounted for the considerable proportion comparing to two remaining sports. In 2008, British parents expended an average of around 20 pounds on their children’s sporting activities. Additionally, that was recorded to be ever-increasing over the following six years until it reached a peak at approximately 30 pounds. According to the participation numbers graph, in 2008 approximately 8 million British children played football while only 2 million children were enrolled in swimming clubs and less than 1 million practiced athletics. The figures for football participation remained relatively stationary. The opposite was true for the rest, swimming participators almost doubled, to nearly 4 million and there was a roughly fivefold increase in the number of children doing athlestics.
The couple of line graphs depict the average monthly British parents expenditure on
children’s
sporting activities and the statistic for
children
in Britain participating in three
different
sports from 2008 to 2014. It can be
seen
that the money parents spending had an
evidently
steady rise over the six-year period, starting in 2008. In terms of the sum of
children
taking part, football accounted for the considerable proportion comparing to two remaining sports. In 2008, British parents expended an average of around
20 pounds
on their
children’s
sporting activities.
Additionally
, that
was recorded
to be ever-increasing over the following six years until it reached a peak at approximately
30 pounds
. According to the participation numbers graph, in 2008 approximately 8
million
British
children
played football while
only
2
million
children
were enrolled
in swimming clubs and less than 1
million
practiced athletics. The figures for football participation remained
relatively
stationary. The opposite was true for the rest, swimming participators almost doubled, to
nearly
4
million
and there was a roughly fivefold increase in the number of
children
doing
athlestics
.
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