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The map shows the changes in fonton and headly town from1925 till today.

The map shows the changes in fonton and headly town from1925 till today. B7qxV

The picture maps outline the operation took place in layout of two towns namely fronton and headly village from 1925 to 2021. In 1925, there were two town situated in East and West namely fronton and headly accordingly. The transport facility was provided through railway track in fonton, while heading town was connected with road. 50 year later, considerable changes has been took place in the area of forest found by which area got expand along with connectivity by a dual road constructing in between. on other hand, there was not infrastructure build in forton, however, there had been many facilities introduce in a headly village. Moving futher, housing established had erected in west of this village, local shop in South of housing estate and leisure centre was added in the east of housing is state road became to be in present airports town Mike migrate together and became one where as housing state and large slightly Lucas shop is converted into supermarket business park on the other side was developed in this area just in opposite side railway station with extension of railway track along with hotel behind it. Overall, during approximately a century, area became more modernise with introduction of infrastructural as well as transport facility.

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