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The chart below gives information about the types of accommodation for people aged 25-34 in the UK. Use the language and sentence structures used in this lesson to write a paragraph to describe the trends presented in the bar chart.

The chart below gives information about the types of accommodation for people aged 25-34 in the UK. Use the language and sentence structures used in this lesson to write a paragraph to describe the trends presented in the bar chart. PL8pp
The chart provided the data about the percentage of two types of accommodation for people aged 25-24 in the United Kingdom over the period from 2004 to 2014. Overall, the rate of home owners tended to decline throughout these year, while the renter’s proportion grew up gradually in that time. In 2004, the number of people owning a home reached a peak, with rise about 60 percent. The percentage still remained stable above 50 percent until 2009. After that, it fell moderately and hit its lowest point to approximately 35% in the year 2014. There was a steady fluctuation in the proportion of renters from 2004 to 2008. The percentage of boarder increased remarkable in 2009, just over 30 percent. Then, it went up consistently and grew maximum for nearly 50 percent.
The chart provided the data about the percentage of two types of accommodation for
people
aged 25-24 in the United Kingdom over the period from 2004 to 2014.

Overall
, the rate of
home owners
tended to decline throughout
these year
, while the renter’s proportion grew up
gradually
in that time.

In 2004, the number of
people
owning a home reached a peak, with rise about 60
percent
. The percentage
still
remained stable above 50
percent
until 2009. After that, it fell
moderately
and hit its lowest point to approximately 35% in the year 2014.

There was a steady fluctuation in the proportion of renters from 2004 to 2008. The percentage of boarder increased remarkable in 2009,
just
over 30
percent
. Then, it went up
consistently
and grew maximum for
nearly
50
percent
.
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IELTS academic The chart below gives information about the types of accommodation for people aged 25-34 in the UK. Use the language and sentence structures used in this lesson to write a paragraph to describe the trends presented in the bar chart.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
132 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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