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maps about hospital center in 2007 up to 2010

maps about hospital center in 2007 up to 2010 b2Pag

Given are the maps providing us information regarding the city hospital and how its access routes have been changed from 2007 to 2010. Overall, it is starkly apparent that some new infrastructures have been built during these three years which made the area more convenient. When scrutinizing more rigorously, it can be inferred that at the east of the city health center, a new public lot has sprung up. This parking is specialized for people only, whereas the old one which was located across the city hospital was used by both public and staff. Moreover, two roundabouts have developed. One is in front of the health care center and the other is at the bottom of the hospital road at the southernmost. The second square is built instead of the prior intersection. Turning to the bus station alternation, in 2007, there were six bus stops where the hospital road passed in the middle of them. In 2010, however, the bus station at the east of that road was demolished. The three other buses stop also came together in the west of the city hospital and made a large single bus station. Not only has it access to both roundabouts, but also created more space for staff’s parking.

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 the maps providing us information regarding the city You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
hospital
 and how its access routes have been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 from 2007 to 2010.

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, it is starkly
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some
 new infrastructures have been built
 during these three years which made the area more convenient.

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, it can be inferred
 that at the east of the city health center, a new public lot has sprung up. This parking is specialized
 for This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
, whereas the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 one which was located
 across the city You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
hospital
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used
 by both public and staff. Moreover
, two roundabouts have developed. One is in front of the health care center and the other is at the bottom of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
hospital
 road at the southernmost. The second square is built
instead
 of the prior intersection.

Turning to the bus station alternation, in 2007, there were six bus This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :terminateceasesdiscontinues
stops
 where the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
hospital
 road passed in the middle of them. In 2010, however
, the bus station at the east of that road was demolished
. The three other buses This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :terminateceasediscontinue
stop
also
 came together in the west of the city You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
hospital
 and made a large single bus station. Not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 has it access to both roundabouts, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
also
 created more space for staff’s parking. 