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The graphs below show a comparison in the UK and the US. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The pie charts compare the UK and the US in terms of different categories of what the people spend for. Overall, it is easy to be seen that spending on rent and food accounts for the largest proportions of expenses in both the UK and the US. In addition, people in both countries spend a similar percentage of their budget on the remaining four categories. Firstly, the largest expenditure in the UK is for rent, at 30%, while the one in the US is just 20%. In terms of food, the figure for the US is slightly more than that of the UK, at 25% and 18%. Americans spend 3% more on books than the one in the UK. Next, the percentage of spending on DVDs is the same in both areas, 10%. Similarly to that, the citizen in the UK and the US spend 15% of total expenses on transport. People in the UK and the US both spend 15% of their expenditures on going out.
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that spending on rent and food accounts for the largest proportions of expenses in both the UK and the US.
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a similar percentage of their budget on the remaining four categories.

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20%. In terms of food, the figure for the US is
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3% more on books than the one in the UK.

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, the percentage of spending on DVDs is the same in both areas, 10%.
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15% of total expenses on transport.
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15% of their expenditures on going out.
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IELTS academic The graphs below show a comparison in the UK and the US.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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