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The first chart shows the reasons why adults decide to study

The first chart shows the reasons why adults decide to study ELKNM

The given set of materials represents a bar graph that provides information about the study decisions of adults. Overall, adults have almost one in ten chances to connect during studies. As adults have a keen interest in learning subjects, which was 40%, while others were learning to change their working environment, which was 12%. Secondly, the majority of adults studying to become qualified was almost a third of it. Some adults were gaining knowledge because they were enjoying studying, wanted a higher position in their jobs, and it was beneficial for their present jobs. All this was almost a fifth per cent of the total.

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 set of materials represents a bar graph that provides information about the study decisions of adults.

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, adults have almost one in ten chances to connect during studies.

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 their working environment, which was 12%. Secondly
, the majority of adults studying to become qualified was almost a third of it.

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 they were enjoying studying, wanted a higher position in their jobs, and it was beneficial for their present jobs. All this was almost a fifth per cent of the total. 