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The pictures illustrates the arrangement of a wave-energy machine and its geographical location. The diagram explains the working mechanism of a wave-energy machine to generate electricity as the final output. The machine has two chambers in total, one for water inlet and the other for the turbine to rotate. The lower chamber has one inlet channel for a wave to pass through. On the other hand the upper chamber has two channels for the air to pass through. In between the two chambers there is a partition with two channels for the air to flow. The upper chamber comprises of turbines connected to a generator. Whenever the air passes through the upper chamber or the lower chamber creates an air pressure when there is a wave in the direction of land, the turbines rotate and the generator generates electricity. If the wave-energy machines are located near the land the installation costs are low but produce less electricity. Contradictorily if the devices are located towards the sea farther away from land they are expensive to set up but produce large amount of electricity.

The pictures You should probably use "illustrate".illustrate
illustrates
 the arrangement of a wave-energy You use this word too often, consider replacing it withengineapparatusautomobiletoolapplianceinstrument
machine
 and its geographical location. The diagram This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :interprets
explains
 the working mechanism of a wave-energy You use this word too often, consider replacing it withengineapparatusautomobiletoolapplianceinstrument
machine
 to generate electricity as the final output.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withengineapparatusautomobiletoolapplianceinstrument
machine
 has two You use this word too often, consider replacing it withboxapartmentroomcellbedroomcubicle
chambers
 in total, one for water inlet and the other for the turbine to rotate. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
 lower You use this word too often, consider replacing it withboxapartmentroomcellbedroomcubicle
chamber
 has one inlet channel for a wave to pass through. On the other hand
 the upper You use this word too often, consider replacing it withboxapartmentroomcellbedroomcubicle
chamber
 has two channels for the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbreathbreezewind
air
 to pass through. In between the two You use this word too often, consider replacing it withboxapartmentroomcellbedroomcubicle
chambers
 there is a partition with two channels for the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbreathbreezewind
air
 to flow. The upper You use this word too often, consider replacing it withboxapartmentroomcellbedroomcubicle
chamber
Did you mean "comprises" or "consists of"?comprisesconsists of
comprises of
 turbines connected to a generator. Whenever the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbreathbreezewind
air
 passes through the upper You use this word too often, consider replacing it withboxapartmentroomcellbedroomcubicle
chamber
 or the lower You use this word too often, consider replacing it withboxapartmentroomcellbedroomcubicle
chamber
 creates an You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbreathbreezewind
air
 pressure when there is a wave in the direction of land, the turbines rotate and the generator generates electricity.

If the wave-energy You use this word too often, consider replacing it withengineapparatusautomobiletoolapplianceinstrument
machines
are located
 near the land the installation costs are low This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 produce less electricity. Possible spelling mistake found.Contradictory
Contradictorily
 if the devices are located
 towards the sea farther away from land they are expensive to set up This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 produce large amount of electricity. 