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The pictures below show the riverdale college past and now.

The pictures below show the riverdale college past and now. g5lNl

The given diagrams illustrate the Riverdale college 30 years earlier and present. Overall, it is clear that a plethora of things have been built in the college, whereas some areas have remained relatively the same as they were. Looking at the details, in 1987, there was a flower garden near to sports hall, which was on its east side, on the contrary now it has been changed into the stairs above the terrace. The car park on the east of the college building has been now replaced by the flower garden, while the reception can be seen in both maps, next to the entrance. However, present a music room has been added on the ground floor, below the reception whereas there were four offices, earlier above the reception, opposite now it has been converted into a classroom and an art classroom. The library is at the same place as it was 30 years ago whilst the common room below the library has been converted into a cafe. There was a refectory above the library, now there is a office, below the common room. On the west side of the building, there have been no changes in the sports hall.

The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 diagrams illustrate the Riverdale college 30 years earlier and present.

Overall
, it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 that a plethora of things have been built
 in the college, whereas This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 areas have remained relatively
 the same as they were.

Looking at the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
, in 1987, there was a flower garden near to The verb after "to" should be in the base form: "sport".sport
sports
 hall, which was on its east side, on the contrary
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtoday
now
 it has been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 into the stairs above the terrace. The car park on the east of the college building has been You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtoday
now
 replaced by the flower garden, while the reception can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 in both maps, next
 to the entrance.

However
, present a music room has been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 on the This word is British English. Did you mean "first floor"?first floor
ground floor
, below the reception whereas there were four offices, earlier above the reception, opposite You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtoday
now
 it has been converted
 into a classroom and an art classroom. The library is at the same place as it was 30 years ago whilst the common room below the library has been converted
 into a 'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"café
cafe
. There was a refectory above the library, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtoday
now
 there is Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'an
a
 office, below the common room. On the west side of the building, there have been no This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 in the sports hall. 