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The map shows how a village called Ryemouth has developed over the last twenty-five years. There have been several changes, the most noticeable being the increases in accommodation, the elimination of the fishing industry, and the introduction of sports facilities. In 1995, to the south of the village where the sea is there was previously a fishing industry, with a fishing port and quite a large fish market as well. Next to this was a small cafe. On the other side of the road running by the sea stood a line of five shops and a hotel, while situated in the north east part of the village was farmland and a park with trees. The main housing of the village was located in the north west around a main road that runs from the coastal road, with twelve houses, four of them encircled by a smaller side-street. Turning to the present day map, it can be seen that the fishing facilities have all gone, being replaced by four apartments, and the shops have become restaurants. The cafe remains, a

The map shows how a village called Ryemouth has developed over the last twenty-five years. There have been several changes, the most noticeable being the increases in accommodation, the elimination of the fishing industry, and the introduction of sports facilities. In 1995, to the south of the village where the sea is there was previously a fishing industry, with a fishing port and quite a large fish market as well. Next to this was a small cafe. On the other side of the road running by the sea stood a line of five shops and a hotel, while situated in the north east part of the village was farmland and a park with trees. The main housing of the village was located in the north west around a main road that runs from the coastal road, with twelve houses, four of them encircled by a smaller side-street. Turning to the present day map, it can be seen that the fishing facilities have all gone, being replaced by four apartments, and the shops have become restaurants. The cafe remains, a 7133
The map shows how a village called Rye mouth has developed over the last twenty-five years. There have been several changes, the most noticeable being the increases in accommodation, the elimination of the fishing industry, and introducing sports facilities. In 1995, to the south of the village where the sea is, there was previously a fishing industry, with a fishing port and quite a large fish market as well. Next to this was a small cafe. On the other side of the road running by the sea stood a line of five shops and a hotel, while situated in the north-east part of the village was farmland and a park with trees. The main housing of the village was located in the northwest around a major road that runs from the coastal road, with twelve houses, four of them encircled by a smaller side-street. Turning to the present day map, it can be seen that the fishing facilities have all gone, being replaced by four apartments, and the shops have become restaurants. The cafe remains, as does the hotel, albeit with parking facilities which it did not have before. Having been converted into a golf course, the farmland has now gone, while the forest park has been removed to make way for tennis courts. Although the old houses remain, new ones have been built, along with a new road with two new houses beside it.
The map
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how a
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called Rye mouth has developed over the last twenty-five years. There have been several
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changes
, the most noticeable being the increases in accommodation, the elimination of the
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fishing
industry, and introducing sports facilities.

In 1995, to the south of the
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village
where the sea is, there was previously a
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fishing
industry, with a
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port and quite a large fish market
as well
.
Next
to this was a
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. On the other side of the
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running by the sea stood a line of five shops and a hotel, while situated in the north-east part of the
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village
was farmland and a park with trees. The main housing of the
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village
was located
in the northwest around a major
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road
that runs from the coastal
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road
, with twelve
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, four of them encircled by a smaller side-street.

Turning to the present day map, it can be
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that the
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fishing
facilities have all gone,
being replaced
by four apartments, and the shops have become restaurants. The
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cafe
remains, as does the hotel, albeit with parking facilities which it did not have
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gone, while the forest park has
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way for tennis courts. Although the
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old
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houses
remain, new ones have
been built
, along with a new
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road
with two new
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beside it.
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IELTS academic The map shows how a village called Ryemouth has developed over the last twenty-five years. There have been several changes, the most noticeable being the increases in accommodation, the elimination of the fishing industry, and the introduction of sports facilities. In 1995, to the south of the village where the sea is there was previously a fishing industry, with a fishing port and quite a large fish market as well. Next to this was a small cafe. On the other side of the road running by the sea stood a line of five shops and a hotel, while situated in the north east part of the village was farmland and a park with trees. The main housing of the village was located in the north west around a main road that runs from the coastal road, with twelve houses, four of them encircled by a smaller side-street. Turning to the present day map, it can be seen that the fishing facilities have all gone, being replaced by four apartments, and the shops have become restaurants. The cafe remains, a

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