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The charts shows air pollution levels by different causes among four countries in 2021.

The charts shows air pollution levels by different causes among four countries in 2021. x68o
The given bar chart illustrates the air pollution levels by PPM about three main causes in four countries in 2021. The three main causes are electricity generation, transport and industry. The four countries are China, America, Japan and Australia. Overall, we can see from the chart that China are most highest country of the air pollution. In contrast, Australia is the lowest country caused and well maintained of the air pulluiton. The most highest pollution rate is industry in China, the PPM is 80. Transport is 70, electricity generation is near 60. The next country is America, the most significant rate is transport, the PPM is near 60. Whereas electricity generation and industry are around 30. Japan is a litter bit better than America. Industry in Japan is highest, PPM is over 40. Then, Transport is 30 and electricity generation is less than 20. Australia maintained the best of the air pollution problems. All three causes are stay lower, under 20 of PPM.
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bar chart illustrates the
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air
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pollution
levels by PPM about three main causes in four
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countries
in 2021. The three main causes are
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electricity
generation,
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transport
and
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industry
.
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The
four
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countries
are China, America, Japan and Australia.

Overall
, we can
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see
from the chart that China are
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most highest
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country
of the
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pollution
.
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, Australia is the lowest
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country
caused and well maintained of the
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air
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pulluiton
.

The
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most highest
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pollution
rate is
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industry
in China, the PPM is 80.
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Transport
is 70,
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electricity
generation is near 60. The
next
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country
is America, the most significant rate is
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transport
, the PPM is near 60. Whereas
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electricity
generation and
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industry
are around 30.

Japan is a litter bit better than America.
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Industry
in Japan is highest, PPM is over 40. Then,
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Transport
is 30 and
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electricity
generation is less than 20. Australia maintained the best of the
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air
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pollution
problems. All three causes are stay lower, under 20 of PPM.

IELTS academic The charts shows air pollution levels by different causes among four countries in 2021.

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