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percentage of mobile phone owners using various mobile phone features

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The table chart indicates the features of mobile phone was used by the mobile owners between 2006 and 2010. Overall, we can see that, maximum use of mobile for calling purpose over the time period. As shown in the table, there was 100% people used cell phones for make calls in 2006 and 2008 whereas only 1% drop in 2010. Other important activities were take photos, send and receive text messages which is 66% and 73%. Both the activities increased steeply from 2008 to 2010. By contrast, In 2006, there was no data about search the internet send record video but all two were rose rapidly over the time period. Furthermore, play games and play music were lowest perpotion of using mobile which was 17% and 12% in 2006. Afterward, the data fluctuated at 41% over 2006 and 2008. On the other hand, In 2008, music was at 18% ratio and it stood at 26% in 2010.
The table chart indicates the features of mobile phone was
used
by the mobile owners between 2006 and 2010.
Overall
, we can
see
that, maximum
use
of mobile for calling purpose over the time period.

As shown in the table, there was 100%
people
used
cell phones for
make
calls in 2006 and 2008 whereas
only
1% drop in 2010. Other
important
activities were take photos,
send
and receive text messages which is 66% and 73%. Both the activities increased
steeply
from 2008 to 2010.

By contrast, In 2006, there was no data about search the internet
send
record video
but
all two were rose
rapidly
over the time period.
Furthermore
, play games and play music were lowest
perpotion
of using mobile which was 17% and 12% in 2006. Afterward, the data fluctuated at 41% over 2006 and 2008.
On the other hand
, In 2008, music was at 18% ratio and it stood at 26% in 2010.
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