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The diagram shows the recycling process of aluminum cans. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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The given process chart illustrates the information about how to reuse aluminium cans. Overall, this process takes place in seven different steps starting from collecting used cans, cleaning, sorting, heating, melting, rolling, molding in tins and reusing. In detail, firstly, used cans are collected in bin at individual’s level, a separate bin which contains only aluminium cans. Then, in the next step, it is collected from house to house, and in the third step, this collection of aluminium cans are gone through cleaning process via machine. After completion of cleaning, it is send for sorted, shredded and compressed. In the fourth step, to melt this compressed aluminium cans heat is given. After that, in the fifth step, roll making process is taken place, where it is rolled different thickness vary from 2. 5 mm to 6mm. Next, for second last step, molulding is done, for this, aluminium roll is used to make cans with the use of moulding of can. Finally, in the last step, cans are ready for distribution after having some relevant prints on it. And, just under the three fourth proportion of recycle cans are taken place in the UK.

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