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The diagram shows the recycling process of aluminum cans. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The diagram shows the recycling process of aluminum cans. ogkg
The given process chart illustrates the information about how to reuse aluminium cans. Overall, this process takes place in seven different steps starting from collecting used cans, cleaning, sorting, heating, melting, rolling, molding in tins and reusing. In detail, firstly, used cans are collected in bin at individual’s level, a separate bin which contains only aluminium cans. Then, in the next step, it is collected from house to house, and in the third step, this collection of aluminium cans are gone through cleaning process via machine. After completion of cleaning, it is send for sorted, shredded and compressed. In the fourth step, to melt this compressed aluminium cans heat is given. After that, in the fifth step, roll making process is taken place, where it is rolled different thickness vary from 2. 5 mm to 6mm. Next, for second last step, molulding is done, for this, aluminium roll is used to make cans with the use of moulding of can. Finally, in the last step, cans are ready for distribution after having some relevant prints on it. And, just under the three fourth proportion of recycle cans are taken place in the UK.
The
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given
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process
chart illustrates the information about how to reuse
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aluminium
cans.

Overall
, this
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process
takes place in seven
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different
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steps
starting from collecting
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used
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cans
, cleaning, sorting, heating, melting, rolling, molding in tins and reusing.

In detail,
firstly
,
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used
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cans
are collected
in bin at individual’s level, a separate bin which contains
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only
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aluminium
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cans
. Then, in the
next
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step
, it
is collected
from
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house
to
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house
, and in the third
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step
, this collection of
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aluminium
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cans
are gone
through cleaning
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process
via machine. After completion of cleaning, it is
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send
for sorted, shredded and compressed. In the fourth
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step
, to melt this compressed
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aluminium
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cans
heat is
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given
.

After that, in the fifth
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, roll making
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is taken
place, where it
is rolled
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different
thickness vary from 2. 5 mm to
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6mm
.
Next
, for second last
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step
,
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molulding
is done
, for this,
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aluminium
roll is
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used
to
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make
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cans
with the
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use
of
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moulding
of
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can
.
Finally
, in the last
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step
,
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cans
are ready for distribution after having
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some
relevant prints on it. And,
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just
under the three fourth proportion of recycle
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cans
are taken
place in the UK.
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IELTS academic The diagram shows the recycling process of aluminum cans.

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4 paragraphs
193 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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