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The table shows the proportion of different categories of families living in poverty in Australia in 1999.

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The tabular chart represents the persentage of six categories of households living in poverty in Australia in 1999. Overview, it is clearly evident that tha largest proportion of sole parent families lived in poverty while least percentage of aged couple lived in this situation in Australia. According to the table, around 20 percent single parent and single, no children of households lived in poverty in 1999. In addition, 933 thousands couple with children families lived in this situation in Australia. It was the second highest percentage of households who lived in poverty in Australia. Moving further, roughly 7% sole elderly people lived in poverty in Australia and 4 persent aged people lived in this situation. This was the Lowe percentage of households who lived in this situation in Australia in 1999.
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in Australia. According to the table, around 20 percent single parent and single, no children of
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in 1999.
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, 933 thousands couple with children families
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in Australia. It was the second highest percentage of
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poverty
in Australia. Moving
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, roughly 7% sole elderly
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in Australia and 4
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in Australia in 1999.
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IELTS academic The table shows the proportion of different categories of families living in poverty in Australia in 1999.

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