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The diagram below shows the production of electricity using a system called Ocean Thermal Energy Conversion (OTEC). Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.

The diagram below shows the production of electricity using a system called Ocean Thermal Energy Conversion (OTEC). Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below. N5WW
The given process chart illustrates the how ocean thermal energy conversion works and generate electricity. This process consist of evaporation chamber, turbine and condensing chamber. In detail, solar energy converts surface warm seawater which is approximately 29 degree Celsius into water vapour. In chamber salt less vapour evaporated and turns turbine which generates electricity. Then, hot water through which electricity is produced goes down in condensing chamber. similarly the water which contain salt also goes down through pipe around the condensing chamber, which cool down the saltless water with the help of cold sea water from deapth around 600 meter. After that, there is a hole in pipe which run around condensing chamber, and waste salt water goes out from there. Finally, water in condensing chamber turned into drinkable water. Then, It is distributed through various method in house.
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process chart illustrates
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ocean thermal energy conversion works and generate electricity.

This process consist of evaporation
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chamber
, turbine and
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condensing
chamber.

In detail, solar energy converts surface warm seawater which is approximately 29 degree Celsius into
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water
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vapour
. In
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chamber
salt less
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vapour
evaporated and turns turbine which generates electricity. Then, hot
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water
through which electricity
is produced
goes down in
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condensing
chamber.

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similarly
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water
which contain salt
also
goes down through pipe around the
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condensing
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chamber
, which cool down the
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saltless
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water
with the
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help
of
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cold
sea
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water
from
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deapth
around 600
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.

After that, there is a hole in pipe which run around
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condensing
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chamber
, and waste salt
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water
goes out from there.
Finally
,
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water
in
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condensing
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chamber
turned into drinkable
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water
. Then, It
is distributed
through various method in
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house
.
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IELTS academic The diagram below shows the production of electricity using a system called Ocean Thermal Energy Conversion (OTEC). Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.

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