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The map show the information about the site of school in 2004 and 2024

The map show the information about the site of school in 2004 and 2024 Mrw3a
The map depicts the information about the look of a school in 2004 and the aim for converts the school look in the future there are several changes in this map. Overall, there are many changes in this map. The major changes are the a new building will build in future where as in past there was only two buildings. Att the fleeting glance, it is clear that in year 2004 there was only one car parking is located on front of entrance whereas, in future a new parking will be invented behind the third school building. However, a new road will be built behind the second school building and it ends at second car parking. Moving further, in past there were only two school buildings in contrast, they will planed to built a new building at place of sports field and the sports field replaced the along side of the road and close to the second parking. In addition, in past a path was between the building 1 or 2 whilst, in future the buildings will be attached with each other
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in 2004 and the aim for converts the
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there are several
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changes
in this map.
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changes
in this map. The major
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will build in
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future
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in past there was
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only
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buildings
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the fleeting glance, it is
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that in year 2004 there was
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only
one car
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parking
is located
on front of entrance whereas, in
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new
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parking
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behind the third
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school
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, a
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road will
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behind the second
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building
and it ends at second car
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school
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in contrast
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at place of sports field and the sports field replaced the
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of the road and close to the second
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parking
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1 or 2 whilst, in
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IELTS academic The map show the information about the site of school in 2004 and 2024

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5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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