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the amounts of companies with 50% or more overseas equity in New Zealand, from 2000 to 2020.

the amounts of companies with 50% or more overseas equity in New Zealand, from 2000 to 2020. Ew9DB

The graph shows the amounts of companies with 50% or more overseas equity in New Zealand, from 2000 to 2020. The companies with 20 to 49 employees and more than 100 employees both at the level of around 500 in 2000, and in the 18 years below keep increasing. After 2006, the companies with 20 to 99 employees grew more rapidly. In 2018, there were more than 600 of companies with more than 100 employees, and approximate 700 companies with 20 to 49 employees. There were almost 300 companies with 50 to 99 employees in 2000, which was 200 lower than other two kinds of companies. After 18 years with a slight fluctuation, there were more than 400 companies with 50 to 99 employees in New Zealand. As conclusion, all quantities of varied sizes of enterprises have mentioned were increasing and the company with 20 to 49 employees had largest amount.

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companies
 with 20 to 49 employees.

There were almost 300 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgroupclubcommunityteampartyassociation
companies
 with 50 to 99 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmemberlaborerclerkworkeragentrepresentative
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 in 2000, which was 200 lower than other two kinds of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgroupclubcommunityteampartyassociation
companies
. After 18 years with a slight fluctuation, there were more than 400 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgroupclubcommunityteampartyassociation
companies
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As conclusion, all quantities of varied sizes of enterprises have mentioned were increasing and the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgroupclubcommunityteampartyassociation
company
 with 20 to 49 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmemberlaborerclerkworkeragentrepresentative
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