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The maps compare details the town of Pebbleton 20 years in the past aqnd in the present day

The maps compare details the town of Pebbleton 20 years in the past aqnd in the present day Mrw8k

We can see that, the area witnessed dramatic changes. on the north-west side of the map, the Old Fort has been replaced with a children`s playground. Also community centre is built and an addition houses are constructed along on the north side of the sea shore. Moreover, the Lighthouse which to the left of the previously Old Ford, remains unchanged. In addition, the tennis court is constructed that links with a footpath and footbridge that connects to the school along coast road and the other side of a small river. The area of the film studio has been converted into a block of flats on the west-south side. Interestingly, the school and playing field have remained the same over the time period.

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see
 that, the area witnessed dramatic This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
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on
 the north-west side of the map, the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
Old
 Fort has been replaced
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children`s
 playground. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Also,
Also
 community Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
is built
 and an addition This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residences
houses
are constructed
 along on the north side of the sea shore. Moreover
, the Lighthouse which to the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 of the previously This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
Old
 Ford, remains unchanged. In addition
, the tennis court is constructed
 that links with a footpath and footbridge that connects to the school along coast road and the other side of a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 river.

The area of the film studio has been converted
 into a block of flats on the west-south side. Interestingly
, the school and playing field have remained the same over the time period. 