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The development which occurred in the village of Stamdorf is illustrated in these maps below over 30 years. It is clear from the graph that the Village had became more modernized and the village’s appearance had changed completely during the period. According to what shown, the eastern part of the Arlington road had developed entirely. The old wooden bridge was redeveloped into a modern Steel one. Near the bridge, the factory was flattened and new trees were planted instead. Moving to the north of the river, small roadside inns were relocated to the south of the Thames river, while a new extension of the main road was built leading to a new large industrial area. Just over the extension, an industrial staff quarter was erected. On the other hand, the western district of the main road witnessed big changes. Starting from newly constructed housing estates, which situated on the northern and southern part of the Thames river. The Field opposing the Arlington road in 1985 was relocated southerly adjacent to the river. To sum up, we could say that although many changes took place in the village, the village’s planning remained almost the same during the two years.

The development which occurred in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsuburbcenter
village
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Stamdorf
is illustrated
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clear
 from the graph that the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsuburbcenter
Village
 had Use past participle here: "become".become
became
 more modernized and the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsuburbcenter
village’s
 appearance had This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
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According to what shown, the eastern part of the Arlington You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
 had developed entirely
. The This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 wooden bridge was redeveloped
 into a modern Steel one. Near the bridge, the factory was flattened
 and new trees were planted
instead
. Moving to the north of the river, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 roadside inns were relocated
 to the south of the Thames river, while a new extension of the main You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
was built
 leading to a new large industrial area. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
Just
 over the extension, an industrial staff quarter was erected
.

On the other hand
, the western district of the main You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
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big
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changes
. Starting from newly
 constructed housing estates, which situated on the northern and southern part of the Thames river. The Field opposing the Arlington You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
 in 1985 was relocated
southerly
 adjacent to the river.

To sum up, we could say that although This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 took place in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsuburbcenter
village
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsuburbcenter
village’s
 planning remained almost the same during the two years. 