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The map reveals the honing of Paradise Island between past and now.

The map reveals the honing of Paradise Island between past and now. J3N7k
The given two maps compares changes which have taken place in the Paradise Island from the past to the present day. Overall, it is evident that the Paradise Island has been renovated with some places opening up for the visitors today. On the westsouth Scientific research station was removed. Then instead of this swimming pool and hotel complex were constructed. In addition, around the trees were cut down for numerous places. The following building new facilities including open restaurant, cycle path and BBQ area were observed. In the east near natural spring and in the westsouth cruise ship was introduced. Moreover, while rocks still remains in the northeast, swimming was permitted in the beach and as for the pier itself, it was expaned. The next differ was to create scenic lookout along the island.
The
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two maps compares
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changes
which have taken place in the Paradise Island from the past to the present day.

Overall
, it is evident that the Paradise Island has
been renovated
with
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some
places opening up for the visitors
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today
.

On the
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westsouth
Scientific research station
was removed
. Then
instead
of this swimming pool and hotel complex
were constructed
.
In addition
, around the trees were
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
cut
down for numerous places. The following building new facilities including open restaurant, cycle path and BBQ area
were observed
. In the east near natural spring and in the
Possible spelling mistake found.
westsouth
cruise ship
was introduced
.

Moreover
, while rocks
still
remains in the northeast, swimming
was permitted
in the beach and as for the pier itself, it was
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expaned
. The
next
differ was to create scenic lookout along the island.
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IELTS academic The map reveals the honing of Paradise Island between past and now.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
134 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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