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The map illustrates two possible places for building a new shopping mall in Brandfield city.

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The map illustrates two possible places for building a new shopping mall in Brandfield city. Overall, to the west, golf course is located for the two sites. Both of the sites are close enough to the city centre. The sites are not close to each other. In terms of site1, is located north to the city centre. To the east, a river run through a railway, which located on the east side of site1. To the northwest of the site there is a road cross housing estate. Site1 surrounded by the river, railway and road. On the other hand, to the southeast, of the map site2 is located. On the right, of the site there is a railway, which is close to industrial estate. On the left, a road located to the site2, while it continue to the northeast of the map. Another road cross the railway of site2. The river is located to the west of the site.
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Brandfield
city.
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for the two
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. Both of the
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are close
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to the city
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. The
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are not close to each other. In terms of
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, is
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north to the city
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. To the east, a river run through a
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on the east side of
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. To the northwest of the
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there is a
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cross housing estate.
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surrounded by the river,
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.
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, to the southeast, of the map
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site2
is
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. On the right, of the
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site
there is a
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, which is close to industrial estate.
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cross the
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IELTS academic The map illustrates two possible places for building a new shopping mall in Brandfield city.

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