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the grap shows average emission of co2 per person in uk,sweden,italy,portugal between 1967 and 2007

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The line graph illustrates the average released carbon dioxide by each individual in four countries for 40 years between 1967 and 2007. Units are measured in metric tonnes. On the whole, the highest Co2 emitting country is United Kingdom with 9 metric tonnes in 2007. However Sweden and Portugal were the least with 5. 5 metric tonnes gas discharge. In 1967 UK with the 11 metric tonnes emission rapidly reduced to 9 by 2007, whereas Italy has increased from 4. 2 to7. 8. Sweden has reached to the peak with 11 tonnes in 1977 and then gradually decreasesto 7 and finally came to 5. 5. Portugal had minimum of 1 tonne discharge of gas in 1967, however it started increasing slowly and finally reached to 5. 5in 2007.
The line graph illustrates the average released carbon dioxide by each individual in four countries for 40 years between

1967 and 2007. Units
are measured
in metric tonnes.

On the whole
, the highest Co2 emitting country
is United
Kingdom with 9 metric tonnes in 2007.
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However
Sweden and Portugal
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were


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the
least with 5. 5 metric tonnes gas discharge.

In 1967 UK with the 11 metric
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tonnes
emission
rapidly
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reduced
to 9 by 2007, whereas Italy has increased from 4. 2 to7. 8.

Sweden has reached to the peak with 11 tonnes in 1977 and then
gradually
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decreasesto
7 and
finally
came to 5. 5.

Portugal had minimum of 1 tonne discharge of gas in 1967,
however
it
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started
increasing
slowly
and
finally
reached to 5. 5in 2007.
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