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The map illustrates town of Garlsdon where new supermarkets (S) are planned. Overview, there are two new supermarkets that are S1 and S2 planned in this town.

The map illustrates town of Garlsdon where new supermarkets (S) are planned. Overview, there are two new supermarkets that are S1 and S2 planned in this town. Q2rnX
The map illustrates town of Garlsdon where new supermarkets (S) are planned. Overview, there are two new supermarkets that are S1 and S2 planned in this town. Garlsdon has the highest number of population with 65000 when compared to the neighborhood towns that is 10, 000 people in Hindon, Bransdon with 15000 and Cransdon with 29000 people. The second supermarket( S2) is planned in the town centre which has no traffic zone. On the North and South of the S2, there is industry and surrounding s2 is the housing. Three main roads is attached to the town centre, one which is going towards Hindon town in 12 km and the other two going towards south in left and right side of the town which is 16 km to Brandsdon and 25 km to Cransdon respectively. Additionally, the railway is passing from the town centre. Railway, one end is towards Hindon town and other end towards Cransdon. on the other hand, the S1 is situated in the countryside in between the main road towards Hindon and the railway going in the same direction.
The map illustrates
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Garlsdon
where new supermarkets (S)
are planned
. Overview, there are two new supermarkets that are S1 and S2 planned in this town.

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Garlsdon
has the highest number of population with 65000 when compared to the neighborhood
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10, 000
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Hindon
,
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Bransdon
with 15000 and
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Cransdon
with 29000
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. The second supermarket
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(
S2)
is planned
in the
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centre
which has no traffic zone. On the North and South of the S2, there is industry and surrounding s2 is the housing. Three main roads
is attached
to the
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centre
, one which is going towards
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Hindon
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in 12 km and the other two going towards south in
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left
and right side of the
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which is 16 km to
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Brandsdon
and 25 km to
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Cransdon
respectively
.
Additionally
, the railway is passing from the
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centre
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Hindon
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Cransdon
.
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the other hand, the S1
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Hindon
and the railway going in the same direction.
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IELTS academic The map illustrates town of Garlsdon where new supermarkets (S) are planned. Overview, there are two new supermarkets that are S1 and S2 planned in this town.

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