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The 2 maps illustrate how a health care center is expected to change in the future

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The 2 maps illustrate how a health care center is expected to change in the future Overall, the maps have undergone several changes, the most important of which are the demolition of the car park and library, the expansion of the concert hall, shopping center and the construction of Hotel & Restaurant, open Park and Underground Car Park. In the North – West, the Car park will be demolished to make way for a new theater and in the South-West, a new council office will be erected, replacing the old exhibition hall. In the middle of this center, the location of the Concert Hall won’t be changed but it will be expanded in the future. While, in the South, the Council Office will be destroyed to make way for a new Open car park and an Underground Car park. At the intersection of A. Avernue and D. Street, a car park will be converted into the Hotel & Restaurant, while in the North East, the shopping center will be expanded. In addition, at the Bottom right-hand corner, the Exhibition Hall will be erected, replacing the old car park.
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