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The map illustrates the development of Meadowside village and Fonton, a neighbouring town in 1962, 1985 and now.

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The map illustrates the development of Meadowside village and Fonton, a neighbouring town in 1962, 1985 and now. Overall, there are so many developments and Meadowside village and Fonton town had been connected by a road. So many new things have grown between the village and town. In 1962, there is nothing and only village and town can see. A railway road was crossed the Fonton town and Meadowside village located in the west to the Fonton town. In 1985, there were some developments between village and the town. Two roads were constructed and in the beginning it was a one road. After that, it divided and one gone to the North and one connected village and the town. New housing estate, super store and leisure complex were built. Now, there are huge changes than the past years. There is a new station built up between the town and the village and one railway path connected to the station. Meadowside Village name change as Meadowside Suburbs now. Also, recently business park and a hotel has been built up between the Meadowside Suburbs and Fonton Town.
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Meadowside
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village
and
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Fonton
, a
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neighbouring
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town
in 1962, 1985 and
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developments and
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Meadowside
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village
and
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Fonton
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town
had
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road
.
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So
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many
new things have grown between the
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village
and town.

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village
and
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can
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see
. A railway
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road
was crossed
the
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Fonton
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town
and
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Meadowside
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village
located in the west to the
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Fonton
town.

In 1985, there were
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developments between
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and the
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town
. Two
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were constructed
and in the beginning it was a one
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. After that, it divided and one gone to the North and one connected
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and the
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. New housing estate, super store and leisure complex
were built
.

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Now
, there are huge
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changes
than the past years. There is a new station built up between the
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town
and the
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and one railway path connected to the station.
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Meadowside
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Village
name
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as
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Suburbs
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, recently business park and a hotel has
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up between the
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Suburbs and
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Fonton
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IELTS academic The map illustrates the development of Meadowside village and Fonton, a neighbouring town in 1962, 1985 and now.

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