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The give graph show the 4 category of citures fruits and top of 3 countries which were exported in 2012

The give graph show the 4 category of citures fruits and top of 3 countries which were exported in 2012 R5qmk
The given bar graph compares the 4 category of citrues fruits in top 3 countries during 2012 In general, the huge export of orange was South Africa. on the other hand, the turkey was the most exporter in the case of grape fruits. While, the lemons and other huge export placed in Mexico country. Firstly, we can see that, in case of orange, the greatest export of this particular citrus fruit was in South Africa, there were 1000 tonnes, as against 500 tonnes of Egypt and zero tonnes in US. The highest exporter of grapefruit s was turkey. It was 400 tones as opposed to 300 tonnes in Mexican and 200 tonnes in Argentina Secondly, The Mexico was the greatest exporter of lemons and a number of more. It was nearby 500 tonnes.
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the other hand, the turkey was the most exporter in the case of grape fruits. While, the lemons and other huge export placed in Mexico country.

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that, in case of orange, the greatest export of this particular citrus fruit was in South Africa, there were 1000 tonnes, as against 500 tonnes of Egypt and zero tonnes in US. The highest exporter of grapefruit s was turkey. It was 400 tones as opposed to 300 tonnes in Mexican and 200 tonnes in Argentina

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, The Mexico was the greatest exporter of lemons and a number of more. It was nearby 500 tonnes.
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IELTS academic The give graph show the 4 category of citures fruits and top of 3 countries which were exported in 2012

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